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Slapping and stabbing
ОтветитьWhere’s the :ardethaGasm: emote when you need it🔥
ОтветитьI’m tempted to make a Twins edit to this song tbh, this is fucking BANGER
ОтветитьAhhh here it is boys! Man getting these gnarly beats
ОтветитьThese beats though. Is there anything you can't do?
ОтветитьOh fuck yes, this is so good, an absolute banger!
ОтветитьThis was amazing
ОтветитьAbsolute banger
Ответитьyo i need a face reveal asap bro
ОтветитьOH HOLYYY 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
ОтветитьIf you can I think JRM would appreciate being a producer too and give you different toilet flushes as a beat 😳👉👈, this ones sick! So far my favorite one keep it up man.
Ответитьstraight up banger
ОтветитьThis is TOO good! Spotify when? :)
ОтветитьAnother music video, another banger! Keep up the good work! <3
ОтветитьThat bass has be banging
ОтветитьAny chances to listen to it via Spotify?
ОтветитьBeautiful. Keep up the good work.
Ответитьzimbabwe bubba song next up 🗣️💯
ОтветитьAh yes this is such a banger bruv
ОтветитьNow Zimbabwe Bubba has to do one now! This was great btw, love your content
ОтветитьCorpse vibe + sick beat,
Damn brudha, you have done bits here
Please sing this in zimbabwe bubba's voice
ОтветитьOh shit ardetha IS BACK LETS GO BRO
ОтветитьThe lyrics are genius, but this isn't my type of song. Good work though!
ОтветитьMy mans laying down heat dude
Ответитьarde dropping bangers as always
Ответить"feel free to do"....
ОтветитьSpotify?
ОтветитьI am truly in Love with all your songs❤ this will gonna be my number 1 of my favorite songs🔥🥵🔥
Ответитьholy shit you sound like rustage if he was British xD
Ответитьstilll want these on spotify man
ОтветитьDOWN, DOWN, DOWN, DOWN
ОтветитьYou're killing it!
Ответитьto be honest i'm not really liking this one. however i would never dislike a vid of yours keep doing your thing man
ОтветитьYo no way lifeline be hitting different now a days
ОтветитьBruh no, all people do is just notice things rhyme and say OH YEA ITS A BANGER. He doesn’t have any emotion to his voice you need to sound angry or Dememted you just are spitting words to spit words you lack emotion the down down down and blood to the floor parts ruins the flow of the song and the transitions are awkward my guy and the faster part of main verse is kinda just basic I fuck bitches I earned all of this and I’m hurt people I am a king .like visions was your best project by far it had directions a story and flowed great the ONLY ISSUE with vision is your British accent and other rappers like 21 savage and mf doom have shown the ability to utilize it properly or change it someway this right here uh no worse than visions and for the love of GOD STOP THAT FAST RAPPING SHIT o understand building cadence or hype but people have been doing this since rap god and it hasn’t been good since understand when to use the ability just showing it off makes it less interesting I’d like the main verse way more if you slowly kept building up then got to that hype fast rapping just going at 100 miles per hour doesn’t make it good it just shows you can speak fast. Your song lacked general direction and motive
Like if you were conveying a character and how they act that’s what I got but it seems like you were afraid to take your time with the song there’s nothing wrong making it 4-6 minutes to explain your story but it feels sporadic and just rushed .
He’s my take on potential edits for the first verse cause your chorus is obviously build up to a demented character I don’t wanna change it too much because it’s just something I made in a few minutes.
You don’t want to find me In the brisk moonlight
Vile intentions looking for a victim the end to this party is frightening
Sneered In the jaws of the unhinged
Thought you lost me ?
I didn’t have the scent?
Didn’t expect me to bite ya
Rushing and gushing
You heart keeps thumping
Sweet as can be watching you struggle in the weeds
The frantic little fighter
Fear fresh on the face love the teasing little chase
The thrill of the hunter makes me hyper
Hold your tounge
Talking to a reaper
Got the heads of your family
From my crypt keepers
The fragile mind writhes in strife and agony
I love the picture I’m painting another family tragedy
Now name calling just makes your disappearance more tragic
I’ll show you how to skin a rat clean with a little parasitic magic.
That’s just something I threw together uh btw when did horror rap become a thing besides big lurch
Can we talk about this mans hand please?
ОтветитьSpotify when?
ОтветитьHoly shit this is FIRE
ОтветитьHey Ardetha!
Just gotta say - I love any original content like that but I want to give my personal opinion about this one:
1) The beat is lit. That's it, it's good.
2) Visuals and lyrics are edgy as fuck but they go in line with your whole "theme" so I don't really mind that. Beat is worth it.
3) The chorus sounds good. Crispy. I like it.
4) The verses. Sooo... Yeah... They're not great in my opinion. I don't feel any OOOMPH in them when you sing them. Feels like you're just lazily reading your homework in front of a classroom.
I'd like to hear more emotions from you! Not saying that you should do some crazy stunts with the voice, no.
Just put the words in your head and let them flow through your mouth, with all the emotions. Don't be afraid to raise your voice, maybe even try screaming. Don't just "read" the verses.
And that's it. Again, love your videos and songs, but I feel like some of them and this one specifically can become REALLY GOOD if you put more OOOOOOOMPH into them while singing.
But that's just my two cents.
Good luck with the next one! :)
This actually slaps
ОтветитьNice lyricism i like how its not my style but you still came in with some Bars in the second verse that was more “rappish” for lack of a better term
ОтветитьPOV: You took a wrong turn in the UK
ОтветитьAnother BANGER by Arde... same as susal. Keep it up my guy! Have u considered uploading on spotify??
Ответитьbro I slept on this the fuck???
ОтветитьI don't know of you so I wasn't expecting this to snap this hard.
This a banger by all accounts, dope ass hook 🥵
wow, this song is 💯! insane potential!
ОтветитьUnironically have been bumping this one. Probably my favorite one you've dropped amigo. I hope you get back into making music because you actually spit some real bars
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