[Part 1] Gained a Pair of X-Ray Eyes, and All Women and Objects Become Transparent Before Me!

[Part 1] Gained a Pair of X-Ray Eyes, and All Women and Objects Become Transparent Before Me!

Panda Fantasy Chronicles

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@Toka972
@Toka972 - 26.09.2024 08:44

This is really bad. The development is illogical. I'm only 25mn in and thinking I'm gonna quit if it doesn't get better soon. Characters are going from bad to good, and back in just a few words. One second, a doctor is seen as the worst, the next second he is the second coming of Jesus juat because there's a sick kid in front... He has yet to do anything but somehow his persona change category... And it's the same with other characters, places, situations, arguments.... One second the mc is a hero, the minute after the guy he saved tells him if he does not fix the kid he will be offed with his own family... It doesn't make sense. It's like everyone is bipolar It's weak and cheap, just like when a 6 year old try to tell a joke.

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@azkafen9306
@azkafen9306 - 28.09.2024 01:28

Good story not a useless MC. This MC is not a simp not a soft rice either. However he is a little to soft to his enemies. However this is a story of a sea king in the making you have been warned oh and it is filled with all the normal tropes

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